Thursday, October 6, 2011

Thesis Statement

 The title of the post is "You failed-- but the what did you do," written by someone who calls himself  Maj. Pain. His writing is meant to inspire the audience to take advantage of the mistakes they make and use them as opportunities to learn and become better people. While the tone in which Maj. Pain writes is enthusiastic and emotionally compelling, it also reflects a sense of hard nose, lack of compassion which may not attract some of the readers to heed his advice. As well the many mistakes in grammar and punctuation leave it wanting in a sophistication that would usually entail professional advice.

1 comment:

  1. This is a pretty interesting style to write your thesis in. I appreciate your creativity with this :) Thank you!

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